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essay中观点越多分数越高?别做梦了!

如果同学们了解过essay写作中的“金字塔结构”,那么你一定知道它对于一篇essay,尤其是academic essay的重要性。但是Hotessay小编依然每天可以看到大量的同学,仍旧不会组织自己的观点,不会组织段落里的句子,更加无法搭建文章整体结构。对此小编表示十分着急。要知道,以上所有问题对于任何一篇essay都是致命的。无论你怎么训练语法,背诵单词,甚至死记硬背别人的观点,只要你不解决文章的逻辑、和文章结构的问题,那么只要题目一变,你下次很大概率同样过不了。

今天,Hotessay就想和大家分享一个常见的问题:一般的essay观点到底要有几个。许多同学,始终在纠结这个问题。他们最典型的表现是,遇到会的题目,一个观点可以讨论好久。一旦遇到不会的题目,就开始东拼西凑的写文章。我很负责任的告诉大家,每篇文章的idea不需要很多!如果能讲的明白,每段1-2个就足够了!一些优秀的essay甚至会出现一段一个idea!也许,你会好奇为什么写的少,反而会的高分呢?因为essay写作不是智力测验,而是英语表达能力考试。这一点和口语考试十分类似,唯一不同的是写作要求书面文章。不少同学会犯同样一个错,面对考题,在brainstroming的时候,拼命想观点和理由,奢望靠数量来斩获高分。老外把这种错误称之为:shotgun approach。意思是一枪打出太多子弹,可惜都没命中目标。这样的题目,你会如何构思段落观点。下面就以这道题,给大家做一个分析。
        Question:
        In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
        通常我们会这么思考:
        先把advantages部分的idea全部列出来,然后再列出所有disadvantages的idea。
        Advantages
        1. decrease cars using
        2. reduce air pollution
        3. use more public transportation
        4. less greenhouse gas
        5. lead to a drop in the number of accidents
        Disadvantages:
        1. family pay more than before
        2. lead to the spreading of infections
        3. automobile companies would reduce their employment number
        4. unfair to poor people
        上面的想法我敢保证,99.99%的同学都能想得出来。
        但假如你在写作时,在主体段中,把advantages和disadvantages全数列入,
        那这篇文章一定不会得高分。老师会觉得:嗯,能想出这么多idea不容易。
        可惜了,都没说明白为什么。所以...sorry...5分!
        合适的idea,如何有效放入主体段落里呢?
        以前小编分享给大家的公式,你们还记得吗?
        T+S+E+A+SO+R=high score
        在你写每一篇essay时,都要牢牢记住它,用会它,掌握它。
        给大家看两段关于这一题的高分段落:
        One of the first benefits of such a measure is that the heavy taxes would discourage car owners from using their cars because it would become very expensive to drive. This would mean that they would begin to make use of public transport instead, thus reducing traffic problems and pollution as well. Another benefit would be that much more use would be made of public transport if it was improved. It is often the case that public transport in cities is very poor. For example, we often see old buses and trains that people would rather not use. High taxes would generate enough money to make the necessary changes.
        Nevertheless, there are drawbacks to such a solution. First and foremost, this would be a heavy burden on the car drivers. At present, taxes are already high for a lot of people, and so further taxes would only mean less money at the end of the month for most people who may have no choice but to drive every day. In addition, this type of tax would likely be set at a fixed amount. This would mean that it would hit those with less money harder, whilst the rich could likely afford it. It is therefore not a fair tax.

看完之后同学们明白了essay写作不需要你写太多的观点了吧?Hotessay小编在这里提醒大家真正优秀的essay里面的观点总是能一针见血,而不是像同学们那样认为各种取证,往文章里塞各种不符合主题的观点。这种情况反而是为自己的essay减分的!当然了,对于essay写作的同学们可以联系我们的客服哦!