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英文论文代写结构化与非结构化的摘要表达效果对比

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        说出来很多同学可能不相信,很多tutor可能只会阅读英文论文摘要或者引言。很多同学就不满了,自己辛辛苦苦完成的论文tutor却连看都不看或者根本不会看完,你说气不气?其实摘要的目的在于,tutor能够很容易地、快速地掌握文章的关键信息。然而,写出一个好的摘要的过程,却是不容易的。一般来说好的摘要具备如下一些普遍特征:
        • 简洁、内容紧凑。简单化!
        • 清楚地阐明研究的假设或目的
        • 避免描述不必要的实验细节或统计方法
        • 不含参考文献、表格或图形
        • 极少或几乎不含缩写词语
        • 以简单易懂的方式简明扼要地陈述论文的主要发现
        • 具有与假设或目的相关的简明、清楚的结论
        • 语法正确

        结构化摘要与非结构化摘要是最常见的摘要书写方式,那么两者有什么区别呢?哪种表达效果最好呢?本文中HotEssay小编来为大家举例分析。
        结构化与非结构化的摘要:
        • 结构化摘要比非结构化摘要日益常见
        • 最常使用的结构是IMRAD(即引言、方法、结果和讨论)格式
        • 结构化摘要使得临床方面的读者和审稿者更容易识别出最重要的信息
        • 结构化摘要通常比传统的摘要篇幅更长,但它们可能包含更丰富的信息并易于理解

        下面是一个非结构化摘要和重写后的结构化摘要的例子:
        非结构化摘要
        Combining antibiotics with plant sterols that have antibacterial activity is a method of increasing the effectiveness of the antibiotics. In this study, we synthesized α-spinasterol from commercially available stigmasterol by a novel method in order to increase its yield, and tested the combination of the α-spinasterol with ceftiofur in vitro against four strains of pathogenic bacteria. The minimum inhibitory concentration (MIC) of stigmasterol, spinasterol and ceftiofur against Escherichia coli, Streptococcus pneumoniae CAU0070, Salmonella pullorum cvcc533 and Staphylococcus aureus were determined with a tube dilution method. Results showed that MICs of α-spinasterol against the four pathogenic microorganisms were the same for all (256 µg/ml), or one-half that of stigmasterol (512 µg/ml), and much greater than the MIC of ceftiofur (0.125 to 4 µg/ml). The combination of α-spinasterol and ceftiofur were strongly synergetic against the four bacterial strains; the fractional inhibitory concentrations on E. coli, S. pneumoniae CAU0070, S. pullorum cvcc533, and S. aureus were 0.375, 0.375, 0.533 and 0.5, respectively. In time-kill analyses, at concentrations above the MICs, ceftiofur exhibited only time-dependency against the four pathogenic microganisms, whereas ceftiofur in combination with α-spinasterol exhibited time-dependency and concentration-dependency. We conclude that ceftiofur combined with α-spinasterol, synthetized from stigmasterol by our method, is effective against four pathogenic bacterial strains in vitro. Effectiveness of this combination in vivo deserves investigation.
        重写后的结构化摘要
        Background/Aim. Combining antibiotics with plant sterols that have antibacterial activity is a method of increasing the effectiveness of the antibiotics. In this study, we synthesized α-spinasterol from commercially available stigmasterol by a novel method in order to increase its yield.
        Methods. The minimum inhibitory concentration of stigmasterol, spinasterol and ceftiofur against Escherichia coli, Streptococcus pneumoniae CAU0070, Salmonella pullorum cvcc533 and Staphylococcus aureus were determined with a tube dilution method. 
        Results. Minimum inhibitory concentrations of α-spinasterol against the four pathogenic microorganisms were the same for all (256 µg/ml), or one-half that of stigmasterol (512 µg/ml), and much greater than the minimal inhibitory concentration of ceftiofur (0.125 to 4 µg/ml). The combination of α-spinasterol and ceftiofur were strongly synergetic against the four bacterial strains; the fractional inhibitory concentrations on E. coli, S. pneumoniae CAU0070, S. pullorum cvcc533, and S. aureus were 0.375, 0.375, 0.533 and 0.5, respectively. In time-kill analyses, at concentrations above the minimum inhibitory concentrations, ceftiofur exhibited only time-dependency against the four pathogenic microganisms, whereas ceftiofur in combination with α-spinasterol exhibited time-dependency and concentration-dependency.
        Conclusions. Ceftiofur combined with α-spinasterol, synthetized from stigmasterol by our method, is effective against four pathogenic bacterial strains in vitro. Effectiveness of this combination in vivo deserves investigation.

        结构化摘要的构成
        • 引言
        o 介绍研究的简要背景
        o 描述研究的目的,为什么这样做,重点又是什么
        • 方法
        o 描述研究设计和方法,如
        o 回顾性病例对照研究
        o 随机对照研究
        • 结果
        o 给出与目的相关的具体结果
        o 避免出现与目的无关的结果
        o 给出真实数据,必要时给出置信区间和p值
        o 避免模糊表达,如“相对较大”或“明显差异
        • 结论
        o 与研究目的直接相关
        o 简洁陈述可以直接从研究中导出的结论
        o 不夸大研究的重要性或价值
        o 简要地解释研究结果和影响,以及对开展进一步研究的建议

        不论是摘要还是引言都是论文不可或缺的一部分,作为英文论文的“龙头”其重要程度自然不言而喻,所以写好摘要也是很有必要。写不好怎么办?HotEssay为您轻松搞定!我们已经从事留学生英文论文代写服务数年,有着丰富的经验和庞大的写作团队,质量纯属上乘,欢迎体验。正值金秋开学季,我们的优惠活动也在火热进行中,具体活动详情请咨询网站客服~PS.新来的客服MM很漂亮哦,欢迎调戏~ 坏笑.jpg!

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